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Alone in the Moonlight by =nubs01:iconnubs01:



We see her sitting there
With long and flowing hair
Upon that lonely park bench
Crying silently for care…

She searched for love and found it;
She gave her heart and soul.
He stole it from her;
He took it all,
And gave nothing in return.
He ripped her to shreds,
And left her for dead
Upon that lonely park bench
Crying with what was left—

The moon shines upon her face;
A sliver of hope
In a night of dread—

Heart torn apart;
Nothing left to lose;
She looks up to the sky,
And realizes she wont die,
For she sees in the moonlight,
That life will be all right;
That with time she will heal;
Her heart will mend;
She will feel;
One day in the future—
An idea so unreal—

So for now she shall sit
Alone in the moonlight
Hoping that one day
She will be able to leave
The Night…
©2008 =nubs01
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poem for contest :iconamayasfantasy:

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~AmayasFantasy:iconAmayasFantasy: Apr 29, 2008, 9:03:49 PM
Thank you for your submission! good luck!

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~NeoxFlame:iconNeoxFlame: May 2, 2008, 3:16:12 AM
Wow. Good piece!

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=nubs01:iconnubs01: May 2, 2008, 4:37:19 AM
thanx

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~DefaultGrl13:iconDefaultGrl13: 5 days 17 hours ago
WOW. That's a nice poem...

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=nubs01:iconnubs01: 5 days 6 hours ago
thanx....i had this image in my head and when i read the contest prompt i was like yay and so i just wrote the picture

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~DefaultGrl13:iconDefaultGrl13: 5 days 5 hours ago
Nice! I wish I could do that... I have to think REALLY hard when there is a contest involved. And then I usually don't enter...

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=nubs01:iconnubs01: 5 days 3 hours ago
i only enter when it coincides with the pretty picture in my head

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~DefaultGrl13:iconDefaultGrl13: 5 days 3 hours ago
:D I get the feeling!

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