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When a tear falls by ~nubs01:iconnubs01:



When a tear falls
so much is said
when a tear falls
words are bereft
useless
unneeded
just pointless wastes;
words only serve to hide
the tear's meaning
the tear's life
when a tear falls
only one thing is needed
one thing necessary
one thing few people have
when a tear falls
a friend is needed
a friend who cares
a love to console you
a shoulder to support you
a friend you loves you and understands
all that is needed
when a tear falls
is someone to listen
and care
someone to tell you they're there
someone who will stay
as long as you need
some who allows you
to just weep
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I think that this world needs more loving people to just be there

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:iconbiscuitmental13:
I really like this. I love how the poem seems to be seperated in sections, and so the flow changes with the mood. :)
Though to be picky, I think you made a typing error on 'a friend you loves you' am I guessing it's meant to be 'who loves you'? :D

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So true are the words you've written. Truth in Friends. Lovely read, well written.

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I agree... :nod: it's not too often you come across a caring person.. they're a dime a dozen and anymore in today's society anyone you meet seemingly just wants a buck or two out of you... but those are people who we later realize where never our 'friend'

:hug: Great write! Well said

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I love this poem!!!! really lovely I feel this way now..

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thanx...its means alot that ppl can relate

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thanx that mean a lot to me. :hug:

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you're welcome!

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You can close your eyes from the things you don’t want to see but you can never close your heart from the things you don't want to feel:heart:
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Loved it.

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